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exposition moderation 14/2/11 name: Chantelle walt: we are assessing our skills in writing an exposition. should greytown school have extra curriculum activities such as music dance drama and sports? .... WHAT I THINK: I don’t think so because it will take the children out of their learning then instead of doing dance and sports and music and the teachers get payed for getting the laptops and instead they just don’t use them and just but play with music and do dance and other stuff and they wont be able to learn math and reading and all the proper school stuff there just doing music and they can do music in a session. But whats more important is the maths and the reading and the other stuff but maybe they could bring a work sheet home that said learn about music and dance and all the other stuff and when they are older they wont know how to use laptops and do maths and how to do recount but lucky greytown school we do. writhing reading maths use laptops dance cause we have time for all those things but if we don't fit them in we do it tomorrow or the next day and we try our best to fit every thing in and do those thing but other schools don’t do reading and writhing and all the things that greytown school has and thanks to the teachers we are going to be ready for collage but maybe at collage we might do dance and test and most of the things we will know what types of sports do we do:

.minnie ball basketball rugby 7s <span style="font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">soccer <span style="font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">netball <span style="font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">dog ball <span style="font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">and heaps of other

<span style="font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">we go on camp and all sorts we don’t need all that dancing and music and sports cause we have got them and cause there are places that do all of those things.

<span class="s1" style="color: #800080; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">Tsunami wave of destruction: <span class="s1" style="color: #5e5efc; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">Facts about tsunami: <span class="s1" style="color: #5e5efc; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">walt: we are learning about tsunami

<span class="s1" style="color: #5e5efc; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">Everything in a tsunami's path is going to be crushed or broken or washed away. <span class="s1" style="color: #5e5efc; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">places such as Japan and alaska.

<span class="s1" style="color: #5e5efc; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">When the water leaves the country it has hit. It would leave a trail of ruin an death and rubbish

<span class="s1" style="color: #5e5efc; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">Cause of tsunami <span class="s1" style="color: #5e5efc; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">A tsunami is case by an earthquake under ground here are some other reasons why tsunami happen <span class="s1" style="color: #5e5efc; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">undersea landslides volcanic and other things

<span class="s1" style="color: #5e5efc; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">my point of view:

<span class="s1" style="color: #5e5efc; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">This is my point of view this is what i think: <span class="s1" style="color: #5e5efc; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">I think this is a very good book to read and talk about this book <span class="s1" style="color: #5e5efc; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">I hope you liked my work!

19.5.11  Walt Read critically the text and draw conclusions about what we have read.

Here are some facts Santorini is a place in Greece and its made up of a lot of islands Santorini is a place were they ride donkeys The volcanoi erupted 3000 years ago

<span style="font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">Mud Turtles

<span style="font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">My 3 picture story! A 3 pic story is were your teacher picks 3 pictures and then the kids write a story about them here is mine media type="custom" key="10355366" One day i was going to the beach to meet my friends and when I was walking along the beach I saw this old boat covered in moss and leaves and sand as I walked around the boat I noticed a name on the side of a boat as I rubbed of some of the sand I saw the words it said on the side of the boat the jolly roger. Minutes later my friends arrived and we went out for a smoothie and then i told them about this boat I found in along all the sand and leaves so I told them and they aid lets see this boat of your no no i said its not mine so we walked over to the boat and i showed them the boat and they said well why don’t we ask your dad to come and take a look and if he wants it we will take it okay I said so we walked back to the house and we got dad and then we walked to the beach. Then he saw the boat he said this is a very old boat its called the jolly roger dad i said can we take the boat home i don’t know son ill ring your mother okay so dad rang her and she said okay but we don’t have anything to take the boat home ill ring my friend Jane and mike they are sure to have something to take the boat home okay dad are you going to ring them yes son ill ring them now so why dad was on the phone we went around and around the room and then when dad was off the phone dad said to us Jane and mike are coming down now and and they are bring something to clean the boat so we can have a turn on it before we go home i said to my friends when do you have to go home? they said i don’t know i was going to ask you if you wonted to stay the night at my house and then i asked dad and he said ring up your mum and then see what she says so i rang up mum and she said that would be nice do you wont to and i said absolutely i would love to okay let your friend ring up his mum and see if its still alright okay mum love you okay bye now so i handed the phone over to my friend and he said thank you should i ring her up and i said yes so my friend ran his mum up and she said said hello Hun hi mum how are you i was just wondering if my friend could come to stay the night tonight his mum said yes okay love you mum bye so we got the boat and had a play on the boat and then we went home as i got my stuff ready my friend said do you wont to come to my house and i said yeah bro and do you like me and i said if i did not i wont not of came to stay so the next day me and my friend woke up and we decided to go to my house and go to the beach and play on the boat so i packed my stuff up and my friends mum dropped us off at the gate and we walked up and i said thank you for having me when we got a bit closer to the house i noticed something that the boat was not there so i told my friend we ran into the house and screamed dad dad dad came running out and he said what what is the matter kids and we both said were is the boat!!! Dad said we decided me and your mum that we can not look after the boat i said were is it and he said we sold it to Jane and Mike me and my friend said we are going to get it back so i dropped all my stuff and walked to Jane and mikes finally we got there and we asked them for the boat back they said but your dad sold it to us but we wont it back sorry but no well we got it finders keepers losers weepers they said in a loud voice and dad came walking up the drive and said to Jane and Mike hey guys um we would like the boat back please okay well i guess so but if i give it back can we go out and have a long go on it please okay dad said well ill bring a picnic for us okay we all said okay kids lets go back to the house and get some breakfast and then well ask mum if she would like to come so we got back to the house and mum was asleep so i quietly sneaked in room and write her a note when i was going out the door she woke up and said hunnie why are you up this early and why are you in my room um i was going to ask if you would like to come on the boat with us okay hunnie who else is coming um just Jane and Mike is that okay yep sure ill be down there in a minute okay mum and we are making some breakfast for you thanks hunnie. I ran down into the kitchen again and i made breakfast for my friend and then we went outside and washed down the boat. After we washed down the boat my friend and I went inside and we packed some food

<span style="color: #3d3dea; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 120%;">Story bird: <span style="color: #3d3dea; font-family: 'Arial Black',Gadget,sans-serif; font-size: 120%;"> Here is the link to my story that me and my